"A loud cheer went up, and soon, the happy couple was surrounded by well-wishers, congratulating them on their official mating. Soon, they were swept up into the festivity, joining in drinking and dancing to celebrate the happy day. The celebration carried on well into the night with good ribbing and drinking.
Meanwhile, halfway through the meal and drinks, Aaeren noisily excused them, swinging Radisq over his shoulder as he informed them all of claiming his mate."
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